But I Crumble Completely When You Cry
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- From invitee MAKABUZZ (contact)
WHAT A DOMESTIC GENIUS TUPACS POETRY IS, HIS A MARVERL TO LISTEN TO, & HIS MESSEGES ARE SO ETERNALY RELEVANT...MAY HE R.I.P < THE KING, GREATEST EVER!
on May 26 2010 01:02 AM PST ten edit
- From guest aliah (contact)
this is an outstanding verse form by an outstanding poet. In that location is no ane as great as Tupac.
on May 21 2010 09:08 PM PST x edit
- From guest aundrea (contact)
wow, this poem really describes how ifeel in life correct at present. at this very difficult time for me, at the worst times of my life.....im a teenager. so many things are happening to me, and the thing that hurts the most is that i've fallen in dear. i've fallen in honey with someone who may not love me back as much as he says he does. and it hurts considering when and if he falls out of love with me, i will still love him, not sure more or less, but hopefully less because the twenty-four hour period i have him no longer; will be the twenty-four hours i think very hard to myself, should i alive on, or will my life be worse without him. i feel like he's a part of me, and if that office ever leaves, i will exist nothing less than some girl having no meaning to the world.....
on May 18 2010 09:56 AM PST x edit
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- From invitee Alene lambert (contact)
your verse form moves me
on Apr 12 2010 04:fifty PM PST x edit
- From guest Alexis Garcia (contact)
i love tupac && specially this verse form its touching!!! lol
on Apr 05 2010 11:eleven AM PST 10 edit
- From invitee deedee (contact)
I think this verse form is actually focued on evey day life
on Mar xxx 2010 04:48 AM PST x edit
- From guest Shelby VanDyke (contact)
This poem is the most romantic poem I take read most loneliness. We had to use this poem in our poem essay for my English class. It made my heart melt.
on Mar 25 2010 06:17 AM PST x edit
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I-Like-Rhymes - Every bit Robert Browning and others have written - De Gustibus non est Disputandum (There's no accounting for taste). http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/293-Robert-Browning-De-Gustibus---
We all have our favourites and our dislikes and notice information technology difficult to capeesh the choices of others. In that location are many writers on this site that I personally do non regard every bit peachy poets just as their are many that I feel are fantastic and are, at nowadays, omitted. That is a fact of life.
It is undeniable that Tupac Shakur is one of the near read authors represented here. Consistently in the top ten since I first visited the site and my favourites inappreciably brand it into the top 500!
We don't judge their claim nosotros display their works so people tin can make their own judgement, even if it is beyond our understanding. What we promise is that by exposing it in this way we our broadening the horizons of some people who arrive to read one poet and accept time to expect at some other (as you did here).
You plainly both have established tastes in poetry and hopefully will be able to observe many thousands of poets here who practise fit the template. Hopefully othe readers volition find other writers to please them too.
Jim
on Feb 04 2010 09:52 PM PST 10 edit
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- Howdy in that location
I agree with yous that he is a modern poet and shouldn't be part of this site.Simply after all lyrics are a form of poetry.You lot know before proverb that a 15 year old emo could do meliorate think for five seconds.It'due south the offset time that I check his work and am not a fan of hip-hop or annihilation.But it'southward like the blues.You tin can't say blues lyrics suck.Crusade blues is magnificent that manner.
And hip-hop has its own manner.Plus he represents the afro-american civilization.And then you take to know a bit nigh information technology before judging TuPac.
I believe they added it in here crusade they think we can become sth from it.
Check PoetryHunter.com.You'd see it's the aforementioned.
on Feb 04 2010 01:49 PM PST x edit
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- From guest Damaged Angel (contact)
I feel the same way he expressed his self in this verse form it reminded me of the time my grandfather died but hes more of a father to me and after his death his own family betrayed him in a mode they broke his promises and that was later he died how cowardly that was anyways after that i decided to leave it and practice what my father would have wanted me to exercise and that was to exist a rose that grew from the concrete <three Dedicated to Lewis Begay Sr R.I.P 1773-2005 Forever Loved <3
on January 27 2010 04:45 AM PST 10 edit
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- "This poet lived by 1955, but our researchers have included this poem in our archive considering information technology is relevant to the written report of classical poetry. " ??
I'd like to know why.
I'm not asking this out of sarcasm, but basically because I think his 'poems' aren't worth much.
If anyone can explain to me why I should recall more of this poem than that of a xv yr erstwhile emo (admittedly no offense intended), please explain.
I hateful... Allpoetry has ameliorate poets than this. Sure, I tin can run into that it's probably excellent for a rap song, but that shouldn't exist the fundament of sentence right?
If anyone thinks I'k missing something here, or that it is, despite my thoughts, a match for something like this:
http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/6322-T-S--Eliot-The-Waste product-Land
then please, explain it to me.
In case it sounded similar I was mocking everything, I'thou non. Notwithstanding, as he seems to be among the popular former poets (on the front page), I'd like to know if in that location was anything I possibly missed...
on January 07 2010 07:40 PM PST x edit
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- From guest darrell (contact)
2pacis ane of my favorite rapper i want to be like him when i grow upwardly ima do every thing he did
on Nov 21 2009 07:29 PM PST ten edit
- From guest Nicole (contact)
Im going though a vrake upwards and this is how I experience. Alone. Hard to go far though the day. I read this verse form and I experience like it was writen for me. Ive read all his Poems and he is a nifty writer.
on Oct 31 2009 08:22 AM PST 10 edit
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- From guest juan g (contact)
thats life this poem makes me think about my life and how i screw up and now i cry cus it hits me the things that i apply to do is hitting me 10 times harder and i think that tupac is the simply ane that understands me Residuum In Peace Tupac Amaru Shakur
on Oct 26 2009 07:42 AM PST x edit
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- From invitee kylie (contact)
That is a very beatiful and and then truthful pepole should start listening
on Oct 21 2009 12:00 PM PST x edit
But I Crumble Completely When You Cry,
Source: https://allpoetry.com/poem/8574647-I-Cry-by-Tupac-Shakur
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Blue2U - Wonderful !
Great
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Teresa67 - Very Practiced sweet Tupac RIP special child ♥️🙏
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Sandra Colina - if you were hither I would listn and cry with you lot
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Marcia McHugh - Y'all take made being lone and lonely a place that's difficult to be and maybe a reminder to take even a infinitesimal to offer solace. Thank y'all
on Feb 21 2021 09:13 AM PST 10 edit
Jillian-alexis1960 - Well written, just very sad. I cry for some of the same reasons too....Jillian
Adept write
on February 19 2021 08:42 AM PST 10 edit
D.E. Navarro - This is quite an awesome lament. Slap-up example of how to pour your heart out in poetry. I like the repeated use of a hook, very lyrical.
Clever piece
on February 18 2021 08:02 AM PST x edit
ShelleyAB - Iconic. He was an open soul
on February xvi 2021 04:32 PM PST x edit
- Nicely done
Lovely
on Feb xiv 2021 05:51 PM PST ten edit
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on Feb fourteen 2021 04:34 PM PST x edit
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on May 10 2021 01:01 PM PST 10 edit
Raven-Dove - Cute and so very Tragic
on February 08 2021 ten:38 PM PST x edit
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on Feb 08 2021 04:xxx PM PST x edit
Miss Shaysha - This hits hard😪.I can relate in so many means
on February 07 2021 04:42 PM PST ten edit
- Honestly
This very adept 1
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on January 31 2021 08:xl AM PST 10 edit
David Alec Knight - It is good to see some of the better writing from rap artists bachelor at this site. He was capable of expressing great empathy and instilling in the listen an understanding sympathy for his subject. I suppose this true nigh most of his writing born from his softer side. In this regard I always felt that 'The Firm' by Ice-T never got the attention it deserved because of all the other and then controversies at the fourth dimension. In whatever ways, Tupac is existence discovered by the new young, equally my kids are getting into his songs, considering I have encouraged them to similar all music, anything good.
Clever work
on January 28 2021 08:fifty AM PST x edit
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Jenna5 - Beautiful rhythm
Amazing!
on January 25 2021 08:37 AM PST x edit
Ropani - This resonates with me. Beautifully written. Thanks
Go on writing
on Jan 23 2021 04:31 PM PST x edit
E.R. Lane - Our emotions are so real, powerful, and personal at the same time. Nicely penned!
on January 06 2021 04:57 PM PST x edit
Yard .V. Varlu - Effort for shining just some of the vague mixing made confusion. Dear blood brother don't misunderstand me. Delight cheque it. If not I am given, I will be with you as friend for framing. It'south non criticism. Hope you understood. Blessings
on Jan 06 2021 08:46 AM PST 10 edit
Flipsider - ← Tupac is someone I respected no thing how people decide to see him!
Inspired
on Oct 16 2019 04:34 PM PST x edit
Flipsider - Amazing write! He will forever be office of our history!
R. I. P. PAC! Amazing.
on Jan 01 2021 08:44 AM PST x edit
Sudget6 - dearly missed
on December nineteen 2020 08:39 AM PST x edit
risingdawn615 - ← I really like the message rhyme. When I weep I as well tend to similar to weep lone or with a close friend and sometimes listening to music.
on Apr 24 2020 08:27 PM PST x edit
risingdawn615 - I am moved past the lines and the sadness which is expressed and seems long term. It's more than just a sadness about one's own events only as well seems to exist a sadness well-nigh empathy, apathy, and a sense of connectedness in respect to mankind.
on December 11 2020 08:50 AM PST 10 edit
HPenguin123 - This poem explains almost Exactly how I have been feeling lately.
Follow me! (HPenguin123)
on Dec 11 2020 08:39 AM PST x edit
Enexx001 - This is very lamentable, only so true. Ppl don't really care when someone is crying about something. I recall mental health is more important than concrete health.
on Dec 02 2020 08:42 AM PST 10 edit
Lohia29pooja - this is very deplorable and relatable
Keep writing
on November 20 2020 12:45 AM PST x edit
JesseKilgore - Honey Mama is a song by this artist that stomach kicks me every dang time. Give it a heed if u get a chance.
on Nov 07 2020 09:25 AM PST 10 edit
Mazzmouth - very well put sadness is not inferior
but should accept comfort somehow
on Oct 28 2020 08:45 AM PST x edit
Renay Downfall - This is then touching, It says all the things i don't dare to say, it has both a bulletin and beauty. Way to go, please keep on writing poems and never stop! Y'all are inspiring!
on October 24 2020 04:32 PM PST x edit
Conrad1978 - This is a extremely dandy verse form. It touched me greatly. continue up the proficient work.
on November 12 2020 04:34 PM PST x edit
Samantha P - I understand this on so many levels, I weep alone so often
on Oct 23 2020 08:39 AM PST 10 edit
PrincessAlexi - Transparency is rather commended than those who act as if not hurting. Crumble walls better than sturdy ones, to show true authenticity
on Oct sixteen 2020 12:45 AM PST 10 edit
- amazing verse form
on Oct 06 2020 06:05 PM PST ten edit
- amazing poems!
on Oct xiii 2020 10:32 PM PST x edit
MineDamnBrain - It, Has deep emotional feelings only is tried in unproblematic bored cliche rhyming
on October 05 2020 08:38 AM PST x edit
Homer William Poe - Sometimes I cry as well when humanities nature shins through their disguise.
on Oct 02 2020 08:42 AM PST x edit
- I love this
on Sep 29 2020 08:40 AM PST ten edit
Aditea - Honey this
on Sep 26 2020 08:37 AM PST x edit
Kanu - Nice poem
on Sep 24 2020 08:35 AM PST x edit
- I have Tupac's "The Rose that Grew from Concrete" volume of poetry. He was so real, so honest and wise across his years. A major influence in my writing back in the day.
Not bad share
on Sep 13 2020 08:49 AM PST x edit
- You were an inspiration to me for this very reason. You weren't afraid to be y'all. I simply read that yous gave Vanilla Ice promise in his time of need, when everyone else was mocking him, only yous told him to keep going. That'due south a man. You were a cute human, being.
on October xvi 2020 04:31 PM PST x edit
Gifted-and-40 - I understand you're frustration! I intendance lol! I know that God cares!
Great.
on Sep 07 2020 08:59 AM PST x edit
Purplestripedshirt - This is a great poem. It captures how things don't wearisome downwardly just because someone is feeling down.
on Sep 07 2020 08:38 AM PST x edit
Lady A - This evokes neat sadness, tugs the reader's heart. Feelings of helplessness abound....
Such heartbreak to know one cries alone...well written
on Sep 06 2020 04:37 PM PST x edit
Rerouni664 - This is astonishing. Wonderfully written.
Nicely written
on Sep 04 2020 04:xxx PM PST x edit
Luck - Amazing, so damn truthful...
I love information technology when someone captures the bitter truth in such a beautiful flow... Information technology gives me a promise that atleast 1 person volition change through this or will learn from the msg tried to be given in such a mesmerising way...
on Sep 02 2020 08:44 AM PST x edit
AsoboRandy - Writing so true, and pure my heart bleeds for second chance. The unimaginable
on Aug 30 2020 04:34 PM PST x edit
Fred clarke - I tin relate to this, very well put together
on Aug xxx 2020 08:39 AM PST x edit
Chandra Roy - Very poetic work here
Not bad.
on Aug 29 2020 12:42 AM PST ten edit
Shidare - So beautiful and relatable💖💖💖
on Aug 24 2020 01:34 PM PST 10 edit
Frederick Annie - Nicely done. I see it as a powerful invitation into a very private and privileged place. This is a rare a precious invitation that fulfills a need that we all accept for intimacy.
on Aug 24 2020 08:41 AM PST x edit
ARwahll - Merely god can judge me
on Aug 22 2020 04:30 PM PST x edit
Dark Mind - Related so much to this, sadly cute
Inspiring!
on Aug 19 2020 07:26 AM PST x edit
Dark Mind - Honey this, and then relatable, and so expressive ❤️
on Aug 24 2020 04:32 PM PST ten edit
Helen5 - So true then deplorable but so true
on Aug fifteen 2020 04:32 PM PST ten edit
ShortyGilker - This was beautiful to me actually
on Aug 01 2020 04:29 PM PST x edit
- but who do yous know that stops that long,
to help another carry on.
I really dear that line.
on Jul 28 2020 04:35 PM PST ten edit
Hemenasansol - Feeling of exhaustion expressed in a lucid linguistic communication and manner
on Jul 22 2020 12:45 AM PST x edit
- Tight!
on Jul 19 2020 04:34 PM PST x edit
- Practise not take what you have for granted!
on Feb 19 2021 04:45 PM PST x edit
Bethbuttell - Thats sorry, merely I would care, Im just that style with everything I intendance nearly things that other people tell me not likewise
on Jul xiii 2020 12:50 AM PST 10 edit
- we weep cause nosotros hurt and wen in hurting suffering is all the same , but my honey friend just think wen pout turned it around grin that got exist at that place to help ya
on Jul 04 2020 04:43 PM PST 10 edit
teardrop - I often cry too! Wipe your tears, I'll heed! Keep writing from your center. Your paper volition always listen. Great write from the center.
Inspired me
on Jun 25 2020 12:46 AM PST x edit
Nkirote - This is and then deep,I can relate
on Jun 20 2020 11:25 AM PST 10 edit
Jerry washington - Thats very deep and sad. Very touching. Information technology leaves me with a heavy middle. People are there to hear you. Delight don't feel and then.
on Jun 13 2020 08:38 AM PST x edit
Linda Evans - Hello Tupac.....There are parts of this I really like....only if it were my poem/rap I'd definifitely edit out some lines.....namely first verse is great until the concluding line,,,,doesn't work and only detracts....2d poesy quite bluntly I'd flake completely ....third verse....the earth moves fast and would rather pass by than to terminate and see what makes (me?) ane cry so painful and pitiful...that when I weep...no-one gives damn...why
on Jun 11 2020 12:58 AM PST 10 edit
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- I love this poem, beautifully written!
on Jun 06 2020 04:31 PM PST ten edit
Bijayananda Mish - Life brings immense challenges, all dual, joy, and sorrow, A heart cry in pain merely knows the value of comfort, dear. Life poses in timing, stark reality, no i to share, own pot get full.
Great
on Jun 05 2020 08:47 AM PST x edit
Blood-red Darkness - omg!! this is so smoothly written and centre felt. hugs my friend. dandy write go on it up.
on Jun 01 2020 04:33 PM PST x edit
Ginny99 - Me too!
Thanks!
on Jun 01 2020 12:48 AM PST x edit
Mary Rose - I feel y'all. Continue on mind that when it comes to emotional luggage each of usa has our own. You are not solitary, it but most of the time left uspoken.
Bully
on May 26 2020 04:44 PM PST ten edit
Benji4 - i observe this great total of emotion!
on May 26 2020 05:24 AM PST x edit
Yam Yefet - To be alone in a crowed is to be a warrior who climbs a mountain, eventually they achieve the paradise
on May 12 2020 04:30 PM PST x edit
JLovee - The most relatable thing I've read all solar day. Virtually the time information technology'south like nobody cares how bad one person hurts.
on May 12 2020 08:36 AM PST x edit
Wajid Shaikh - Oh human,This ane is so centre touching and soulful
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hank voight - this is so true people who go through something understands i understand. you need to keep this upwards.
on May 03 2020 05:25 PM PST x edit
Mindynewton2 - This is genuine in feeling... I felt for you! I feel for y'all!
on Apr 29 2020 12:44 AM PST x edit
Bida - deep1
Lovely share
on Apr 25 2020 08:39 AM PST ten edit